Poem to the Tune "Pure Peace"

A cloud is her dress a flower her face Spring
wind through the threshold stirs deep peony-dew
If unable to meet on a jade mountain peak
we'll face at Jasper Terrace beneath the moon

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Poetry by Li Bai
Translated from the Chinese by Jeffrey Yang

This poem was written during the Tang Dynasty era (619 to 907 A.D.), also known as the Golden Age of Chinese Poetry. It was originally set to music, but that music has been lost.

The English translation of the poem is shaped into a rectangular form, as it was in the original Chinese, and has the same number of lines. Each couplet, or set of two lines, expresses a different idea. The white spaces are meant to suggest pauses.

Originally published as part of the series, "Nine Poems from Ancient China," in Words Without Borders' May 2004 issue: Chinese Characters.
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Li Bai

Li Bai (also known as Li Po, 701–62) is one of China's most celebrated poets. He grew up in a town called Blue Lotus, in Sichuan Province, and wrote of his early years, "When I was fifteen, I was fond of sword play, and with that art I challenged quite a few great men." After leaving home, he wandered the countryside, writing poems, meeting celebrities, giving away money, and marrying the first of his four wives His adult life included an interlude at the Emperor's court, an arrest for treason, exile, and pardon. He lived through China's Golden Age, as well as the wars and famines that followed.
After his poems were translated into English in the eighteenth century, they became models for English and American poets, who admired his conversational style and emulated his celebrations of friendship, nature, and wine. In the twentieth century, his work influenced such poets as Ezra Pound, Richard Wright, and Lorine Niedecker ("Swept snow Li Po . . .")

Jeffrey Yang (translator)

Jeffrey Yang is the poetry editor for New Directions. He has published a limited-edition translation of Tang-Song Dynasty poems called Rhythm 226, and his translation of Su Shi’s East Slope is available from Ugly Duckling Presse. His own collections of poetry include An Aquarium and Vanishing-Lines. He is the editor of the anthologies Birds, Beasts, and Seas: Nature Poems (2011) and Time of Grief: Mourning Poems (2013).
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Meet Li Bai
13th-century image of the poet Li Bai.
Watch the 2-minute video, "Li Bo: The "Outsider" poet," from Columbia University, and find out why some critics call him a "wild man" in the 90-second video, "Unconventional Poetic Style."

Meet Translator Jeffrey Yang

Below, you'll find Jeffrey Yang's reasons for placing spaces between the translated words, excerpted from his translator's note for the poem.

The English translations emulate the overall rectangular fields (or seals) of the Chinese poems and retain the same number of lines. White space, as in many poems, serve as punctuation, breath, pause, degrees of rest . . . The overarching hope was to convey some of the music and precision of the Chinese in English.

Listen to the Original

Listen to someone reading and singing the poem in the original Mandarin, and read a different translation of it.

"A flower her face"?
How do you imagine the woman in the poem? A five-minute video describes ancient Chinese makeup traditions, which sometimes included images of flowers on faces, and connects them to Disney's Mulan.
Or, read some "Make-up Tips from the Tang Dynasty," published on chinaculture.org.

Jueju: Saying a Lot in a Few Words
A statue of Du Fu, a fellow poet and friend of Li Bi. Photo by Somchai Sun. (CC 3.0 license.)

This poem is an example of a poetic form called jueju, which means "cut-off lines." To write a jueju, a poet needs to create matching couplets with five to seven syllables per line. In such a strict form, each Chinese character (or English word) has to count. In creating jueju, poets try to see "the big within the small" (xiaozhongjianda)—finding emotional, philosophical and religious meaning in careful observation of a few images.

Interested in reading more jueju? "Poems for Parting," by Du Mu, also on WWB Campus, is also in jueju form, and addresses a similar theme of longing for a loved one.

Then, read a few more translated juejus from Li Bai (also sometimes called Li Po):
- "In Spring"—the third poem on the page
- "The River-Merchant's Wife: A Letter," in Ezra Pound's famous, and loose translation
Finally, take a look at a jueju by Li Bai's equally celebrated friend, Du Fu: "The River's Blue, The Bird a Perfect White."

Art & the Tang Dynasty
Tang dynasty-era statue of a woman, CC BY-SA 2.0.
Look at art from the Tang Dynasty: Standing Court Lady, a Phoenix-head ewer, Night-Shining White.

Or, look at art depicting the Tang Dynasty era, composed during later periods, when people were beginning to refer to the Tang and Song eras as China's Golden Age. Landscapes after Tang Poems, Spring Play in a Tang Garden, and A Tang Palace—all created hundreds of years after the dynasty fell.

Imagining Mountains
The poem mentions a "jade mountain peak"—what was the poet imagining? Look at the painting Summer Mountains, from the Song Dynasty era. Dwelling in the Mountains is a modern painting that draws on dynastic traditions.
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More from Li Bai
Read some of Li Bai's other poems, and look at photographs of places mentioned in the poems on the Mountain Songs website.

Listen to poems by Li Bai in the original Mandarin, and read English translations, on the blog Poems Found in Translation. You can also find even more poetry by Li Bai on the Poetry Foundation website, in this archive, or on Black Cat Poems.

More from Translator Jeffrey Yang
Read other poems from the series "Nine Poems from Ancient China," translated by Jeffrey Yang and published in Words Without Borders.
Educators: To teach these and other poems from the Tang Dynasty era, take a look at the lesson plan "Reading a Tang Dynasty Poem", available from the China Institute's China 360 website.

Translating Chinese Poetry with Ilya Kaminsky and Arthur Sze
Learn more about translating Chinese poetry in Ilya Kaminsky's essay, "Translating a Peony."
Then, watch Arthur Sze talk about translating Li Bai and other Tang poetry, translation as the most intimate form of reading, and the differences between contemporary and ancient Chinese. Go to 2:14 to see him read Li Bai’s “Drinking Alone with the Moon.”
(Watch the video on YouTube.)

Music and Lyrics from the Tang Dynasty
The music this poem was originally set to has been lost, but other music from the Tang era remains. Li Bai played and set some poems to the qin, or guqin, a stringed musical instrument. Listen to his poem "Endless Yearning" on the piano and guqin, and read the English lyrics.
Then, listen to American composer Harry Partch's "Seventeen Lyrics by Li Po."

(Watch the video on YouTube.)

They're based on poems from The Works of Li Po, the Chinese Poet, translated by Shigeyoshi Obata, which you can read online.

Tang Dynasty Lookbooks
Li Bai writes, "a flower her face." Read this article from a Chinese state newspaper about beauty and fashion trends for women in the Tang Dynasty—a painting of a Tang Dynasty woman is at the top. Then watch the video that prompted this article—a Taiwanese student's project to recreate the looks of Tang women.

(Watch the video on YouTube.)

Homegrown Hip Hop
Artists in Li Bai's city of Chengdu are continuing to set poetry to music: read all about it in "Chengdu Cool: The Rise of Sichuan’s Homegrown Hip Hop," from Guernica magazine. According to the article, Li Bai's lifestyle was not so different from that of the rappers living in the city today.

More Poetry from Asian Voices
Looking for more poems? Check out the Poetry Foundation’s “Asian American Voices in Poetry” collection.

Li Bai's Influence*

Take a look at James Wright's "A Blessing," a modern poem influenced by Li Bai (sometimes also called "Li Po.")

For more of Li Bai's modern influence, visit the pages for James Wright, Ezra Pound, and Lorine Niedecker on The Poetry Foundation, and read Simon Elegant's novel, A Floating Life, in which the poet appears as a character.

* For Teaching Idea 1

More Poetry from the Tang Dynasty*
For more poems from the Tang Dynasty read Poems to Parting published on Campus, or look through the online anthologies 300 Tang Poems and Chinese Poems.
Then, learn more about Tang Dynasty-era poetry on Columbia University's Asian Topics website.
* For Teaching Idea 2
Teaching Ideas
Reading Grade Level(s): 4, 5
- 1. Writing Jueju
- 2. Li Bai & James Wright
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